Nowadays,the rate of teenage girl's pregnancy is more and more higher.Teenages have internet, magazine, radio with more available and easily accessible imformations about sex than ever. So it is not suprising that our education put a question which makes arguments in society :"should sex education be increased in schools in attempt to curb problems such as teenage pregnancy?".In my opion,i think that sex education should be increased in public schools to prevent different problems in society and everybody must be liberal towards it.Sex education help to decrease teenage pregnancy, to increase the develop relationship, the responsability,attitude tradition and help to learn about advantages and disadvantages of sex.
One of the problems that we can prevent if sex education increased in school, is the teenage pregnancy. We know that students in any places do not hav to know about sex.On the contrary, the average teenage today is immersed in sexual imagery.Times ago, society's morality is still not common with sex education in school.But nowadays, we have a different concept about it because if nobody teaches teenage, they try to find another ways to learn about it. So 45 percent teenage girl's comunity is pregnant, because they have not been imformed about sex or can be because they has a wrong imformations of preservatives. Girls in that case have to stop their education and have to be mother in early age.
The other problem that we can prevent if sex education increased in schools, is the wrong attitude of teenage about sex and pregnancy in teenage. Most of time teenage think this problem likes natural thing because they are ignorrant person or they justify their pregnancy such as they are in love. And we know that it is wrong to take it like that. If teacher teach sex education,they can have a more healthy life, can protect themselves in their consual sex relationship with diffenrent kind of people. I think teacher need to talk more about advantages and disadvantages of pregnancy and how dangerous and life threating it can be. If they are mother in early age , they have not enough money to take care of babies.They also have not enough experiments to build a happy family.That is the reason why the rate of be divorced in youth is high.Besides, there are a lot of abortions because girls do not to want to have a baby or they are teenages’s pregnancy. When sex education is taugh in schools, girls will understand the risky of abortions that they should simply be taugh to avoid. If they say”do not do it” it is healthy for them but if they are going to do it, do it in this way.
Some people think that it is a good idea to teach sex education in public schools, but another think the contrary. They think that sex education helps to encourage teenages to experiment with sexual activities. Sex education makes them more likely to have simply sex because they are more confident in their knowledge of the human body.But teens also do not always know the best ways to protect themselves from becoming pregnant or getting STD’s. So sex education in schools helps teenages to have a right thinking about sexual activities and know the way to protect themselves and their partner.
As a conclusion,the sex education should be increased in schools to prevent many prolems in society.Sex education is viewed a formal instructional program to provide children and young adults with an objective understand of sex as psychlogical and social life force.
Thứ Ba, 13 tháng 4, 2010
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